Yes cinderella rhymes

yeah so i am a dork and i do write in rhyme sometimes. I post this because I want to remember it. I guess I broke and decided not to post when i described cinderella with her leg down an air vent. then it was to cute not to share. I delete some parts and kept the person i shared these rhymes with anonymous because he needn't claim being the recipient of my bad poetry if he doesn't want to.

Cinderella: love is a four letter word. it is a something I've rarely heard. In my absence my trust was tainted. In it's place is a masterpiece I painted. Rarely do I speak in Rhyme. Cinderalla never has the time. Sweeping cinders from the floor. She dreams of passion and nothing more. The glass slipper on her feet. The enchanted prince she longs to meet. The simple notion of a happy ending. is a fate she feels is trending. time and space she does adore. it gives her peace and nothing more. she dreams in prose she is scared to share. stepsisters judge her and it isn't fair. yes the sparrows steal her pearls and sew her dress. they only wait in anticipation of the secrets she will confess. only sparrows know her best. They give her time and let her rest.

Anonymous: beautiful lin

Cinderella: It takes me time to refresh my skills at rhyme and reason. the air is changing and now is my season. A constant game of word play is what i crave. these are moments when im brave. these are memories that I save. I am a simple girl with little to offer. I am nothing more than but a pauper. words mean more to me than gold. believe it or not there something I can hold. Money is quickly used and wasted. words are held and truly tasted. savoring each bitter taste of glory. this is who i am and how I tell my story.
Anonymous: 2 hear such words 2 me is erotic exciting intoxicating magical mysterious joy fantastic fascinating.x

Cinderella: It's been so long since I wrote a rhyme. It takes me effort and a little time. I must recapture my former ease and skill. It is a duty to fulfill. Not just for prince charming. my riddles are personal and quite alarming. slowly I will recapture my former bliss. To write a poem like a tender kiss. The sparrows beckon me to sleep. It will be restless and so deep. Every morning they let me know. When to stop because it's time to go. As I crawl into bed. melodic words dance through my head. Once you rhyme it's hard to stop. words just dance and writhe and pop. It is a passion that was lost. It is a border rarely crossed. You didn't plan for cinderella to play with words. Usually dearest she simply plays with birds.

Cinderella: good i will keep writing them. by the way when i write about sparrows im actually talking about real birds not metaphorical creatures. My loft space is an attic and I keep the window open. I do have a pair of wild sparrows living with me. They nest in my favorite little table. so the birds do chitter chatter with me all the time.

Anonymous: She took off her dress I took a peep
She ran away while we played hide and seek
I asked her about the birds she answered to me there my world

Anonymous: Knock on the door,Linda walks in,sit b side me let the story begin
This a fairy tale or one 2 begin put on this robe it's where it's foretold
Take a sip from the cup let the juice open your mind drift away for awhile into space and time,when u ready I said when u ready come back to us we'll b ready
Sinderella went to another time now she's back she the Cinderella from our time.
The birds sing sweet songs of melody but while u were gone there songs were silent now your back they sing songs of joy
Insert this made me giggle: Never watched your vids up until now
WOW

Cinderella thought it was time to sent you a rhyme. she got her ass stuck in a steel vice. such is the life. She stuck her foot down a shaft. In the air conditioning ventshe could feel cool air blowing. such is the life when you get stuck in a hole. baby it's just out of control. this is cinderella with bruised battered feet. slippers made of fur would be kind of sweet. cinderella falls down holes. one day she may be eaten by trolls. this is the sweet life. full of turmoil and strife. but funny as gold.
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10 years ago
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
I truly love to rhyme. It is something i have done my whole life. rarely is it appreciated. thank you.
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
to DimJandy : Dimjandy my birds left me and i'm devastated. i miss them so much. just yesterday my mom promised to let me get a kitten.
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DimJandy
Birds are cool. They seem to figure prominently in my life. They give me signs sometimes. I see them as a branch of nature that got all the way to crows and raptors and parrots then stopped. Maybe they are just too fragile to evolve any further. In my dreams I am a bird sometimes. I do what I'm supposed to do as a bird very well. Corvus is my name. I taught da Vinci to fly.
Anyway, birds are cool. Be nice to yours :smile: Mine like fresh broccoli and corn on the cob.
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Caleb_Cale 10 years ago
Very Beautiful :smile:
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wolfrider2121
wolfrider2121 10 years ago
Your right missy was a delight in my life but she decided to go back to her chucy husband who decided to pimp her out once away from me, he knew what I would do to him.
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
I found your link and i need time to watch it. I wrote a new ending for my sinderella. anonymous posed a tryst with the evil stepsisters. I couldn't do it. I thought about this fairytale long and deep. The prince had a fetish with tiny feet.
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
to wolfrider2121 : dear wolfrider a rhyme just for you. You stay so clearheaded and dangerously cool. Despite the summer heat you bring air to the street. your writing is a delight. keep up the fight. missy is a lucky creature. wolfrider was her greatest feature.
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snake_500011
snake_500011 10 years ago
to linmarris : I will have a look later for the links need to be on my pcwhen I am hunting for things on the internet
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wolfrider2121
wolfrider2121 10 years ago
Wow bust those rymesoh friend of mine let your inner child rime without any repercussions by this man I enjoyed it
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
thank you my dear, I love a new face. One when I'm rhyming I fully embrace. I know the best poets rarely rhyme. they think it is silly and quite naive. I love the melody and the embrace I receive. I don't aim for perfection. I aim for distraction. Life can be so plain. I like a little rhyme like a cool summer rain. some rhymes are silly. Life is just horseplay and I'm just a filly.
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
to snake_500011 : i would love it. I get a kick out of word play. I've done it since a young age. If i could hold a pencil I could write a rhyme. I used to be amazing but i lost track of time. I never could sit still in class. I doodled and rhymed while kids fought to pass. I could lose hours thinking of phrases that flow. sometimes i suck and sometimes i flow. I don't write about meadows and trees. I write about gravel and scraping my knees. Now my blog about rhyming with black boys makes sense. they could give me a word and I knew the tense. I had a vocabulary filled with material. they had little book learning and my writing was killer.
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snake_500011
snake_500011 10 years ago
to linmarris : I am glad you are back and your flair is still there I would try and rhyme more but my words just dont flow like your's do so easily there is actually a full Cinderella rhyming play if I can find it I will send it to you there is also an English comedian who did a version very rude and not politically correct if I find a full version on line I will send u the link if you like
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
to steevo27 : dave was perplexed by the word cooter. no wonder he tried to pick op cinderella on a scooter. he knew yesterday her feet were eaten by ants. cinderella went down the hole with no pants. she has road rashes contusions and she just rants. with sorrow she looks at him and says 'my poor cooter is to sore for a scooter.'
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linmarris
linmarris Publisher 10 years ago
to snake_500011 : i could play with words all day like people backgammon and croquet. some of my work should be thrown out like trash. i burn them yet people bash. Alice falls down holes. cinderella sweeps up ashes. rags and ritches. cinderella do the dishes. and you both should quit your bitchen. this is snow white's fucking kitchen.
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snake_500011
snake_500011 10 years ago
I said you are a wordsmith and that shows how good you are with words you make them dance and come to life its like being able to see what is there. I hope you get better quickly.
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steevo27
Clumsy Cinderella outside, replaces her dress with a tight pair of pants, falls into a rose bush and gets her feet eaten by ants.
She awakens the next day, outside again, sees Prince Charming riding by on his magical scooter, in an attempt to get his attention, she falls down a vent flat on her cooter....
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