A little song I have written

Your Final Goodbye

Last night I dreamed the saddest dream I ever dreamed,
I saw you standing there with your back towards me me slowly turning around.
You told me it is time for you to go.
You told me it is time for me to let you go. That I will be okay without you.
And then you just walked away.

I Cried
I Screamed
Please stay here with me.
But you just looked at me with a sad smile
Telling me, This is your final good bye.

Next morning I woke up, noticing my cheeks, all wet with tears.
Walking trough the apartment wish never felt so empty... without your laughter.
I really tried to sense you, but it was just like a tomb.
I broke down crying, calling out your name in vain.
Feeling the gaping hole in me, I can barely breath.

I Cried
I Screamed
Please stay here with me.
But you just looked at me with a sad smile
Telling me, This is your final good bye.

Later that day I visited your grave, touching those inscriptions on that cold stone.
Thinking back on when you drew you last breath, did you even knew I was there?
Or was the tumor to far gone?
Suddenly I felt the gentle breeze from the wind, caressing my cheek.
Maybe... I will be okay one day.
Published by Wrenchgirl92
5 years ago
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biancagrl
biancagrl 3 years ago
Beautiful....!
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geileman55 4 years ago
nice song
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sanoj1975
sanoj1975 4 years ago
Kan jag få höra musiken till den här låten?
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 years ago
to Wrenchgirl92 : lucky bunch!
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to Petrp69 : Well I don't have any pics of my two sisters here. But we are almost like mirror reflections of each other with the only difference except for some birthmarks that i am slightly shorter and have alittle motre muscle mass. :smile:
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 years ago
to Wrenchgirl92 : wow can I see pics of the triplets?
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to Petrp69 : Me and my triplet sisters have set music to it. :smile: We have three different bands.
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 years ago
Did anybody added music to it for you?
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Bigbrownie1 4 years ago
Well writen.  Could have been nice to listen 
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Philcand2
Philcand2 4 years ago
well written :smile:
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to Alter_eg0 : Thanks.
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Tattedchica
Tattedchica 4 years ago
I'm really sorry for your loss sweetheart, I've been thinking of my losses to these days. Stay strong Sara, I'm sure your sister will be always at your side protecting you ❤️
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Alter_eg0
Alter_eg0 4 years ago
That's a really nice text and would like to hear it someday with music too... my deepest condolences to you for the loss of your sister, may she rest in peace.
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to iwanuschka : She will always be in my meories. Even if it hurts at times.
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iwanuschka 4 years ago
to Wrenchgirl92 : thats a great idea ! keep her in mind - of course
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to iwanuschka : In memory of my little sister
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iwanuschka 4 years ago
sinnlich und nachdenklich !
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 years ago
Sad song, did you manage to tape it with the right sound with it?
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to marym1 : Tack ^^ Jag har några flera självskrivna med. Och alla på ett eller annat sätt självupplevda. :smile:
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marym1 4 years ago
Fin text. Du har talang! :smile:
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to GeilerPeter1606 : Yeah. That even if it can be hard, you can survive the loss of a loved one. Even if you will still miss them of cource.
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GeilerPeter1606
GeilerPeter1606 4 years ago
Wow! Great work - very touching text. Sad, but it gives hope...
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Kenu34 4 years ago
Fylld av känslor och väldigt fint ..
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HerrPeterHH
HerrPeterHH 4 years ago
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to HerrPeterHH : It is actually a song I have written
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HerrPeterHH
HerrPeterHH 4 years ago
to Wrenchgirl92 : nice poem
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Wrenchgirl92 Publisher 4 years ago
to HerrPeterHH : I don't understand german ^^
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HerrPeterHH
HerrPeterHH 4 years ago
traurig aber schön und ergreifend
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wine-not 4 years ago
great poem
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Bollan 4 years ago
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