Summer vs Jewell Round 2: Necessary Improvement

As of mid-December 2013, about 75,000 people have viewed
my posting of JMRolen's "End of Summer" vid. Summer gets
nicely beaten by Jewell - yet only 65% give a thumb's up.

So, IF some improvements were made in execution, would the
ratings improve as well? Or is there a fundamental problem
that 1/3 of viewers don't like catfights or females beating
up other females? Anyway, here are some suggestions IF there
were ever to be a Round 2 of this fight. IF these ideas were
used, would more than 65% give a positive rating? Inquiring
minds want to know.

1. Music at the start and the static intro is very dated.

2. Outfits are a basic turnoff. Even with big tits and
faces worth pounding, the giant shorts and not wearing
stripper/slut shoes, reduce these bitches from an 8 and
a 7 to a 6 and 5. Here are some better outfits:

http://xhamster.com/photos/view/1097668-33203648.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2648847-43660942.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2648884-43661735.html

3. Dump the gloves. Since the fight is fake anyway, put them
in white MMA gloves, or taped fists, or just bare knuckles.

4. Dump the rounds. Let the winner just pound the loser until
she gets tired or bored or the loser is so knocked out that
she's not responding anymore.

5. Get rid of the "thought bubbles." Let them call names, talk
dirty, or spit. No need to infer some random thoughts.

6. Eliminate fair play. When Summer is knocked down, Jewell just
gives her time to recover and get up before beating her
face again and knocking her down. Jewell should straddle the
befuddled and semi-conscious Summer and just pound her face
until she's ready to stop. And she should drag her up by
her hair, stand her against the wall, and just pound away
more.

7. Allow non-fist destruction. Kicks, elbows, headbutts, knee
drops, drags and throws. Summer can take it. We'll enjoy it.

8. Back to the dirty talk. Say that Summer is just standing or
laying there arms down and defenseless, Jewell should punch
her 80 times in a row - mostly in the head. And call Summer
names, kind of like a mantra: Slut, Bitch, Cunt, Whore. Over
and over again until, finally Summer is fully u*********s
again. Then Jewell (or whichever beater) "Ends" Summer:
Punches/kicks a few dozen more times before leaving the room.

9 Jewell should be pretty well splattered in Summer's "blood" and goes
to change. Naturally, Summer is barely recognizable from the
beating. J.M. Rolen's people are good at this fake makeup. Summer's
dress is pretty much reduced to red rags.

10. When Jewell (or whomever, maybe even another vicious bitch) returns,
Summer has come around, wiped away most of her blood - but is still
groggy, and maybe a bit brain damaged. Jewell drags Summer by the
hair, takes her to another room - or out on the lawn or out on the
street. And starts again to destroy Summer. Another 15 or 20
minutes of working Summer over. Or Jewell could just use the dress
remnants to wrap around Summer's neck or under her arms and hang
her on a hook behind a door, and then use Summer's body, face and
tits as punching bags. Maybe some pleading from Summer? But she
deserves what she gets, as Jewell explains why she won't stop.

11. Summer is knocked out again and Jewell actually turns to the camera,
holding Summer limp by her hair and explains, "Summer used to be
the top bitch. She's beaten over 50 other bitches to mush. Killed
3 of them. Brain damaged a dozen. Blinded a few. Knocked out
most of the teeth of many. So, isn't it finally time that Summer
gets HER turn being the victim? Look at this stupid beaten whore
now! And, you know, I'm not done with her! But I won't beat her
to death, there are some other sluts like me who'll want their turns
with her. Do you want to watch the End of Summer part 3?"

12. Summer is getting to be an old and used up bitch though, so maybe
there are some other younger hotter women/bimbos who can be "Ended."
... Maybe one of these?

http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2474304-40664785.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2363423-38799694.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2644035-43575866.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/1089423-18044651.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2637709-43468060.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2638106-43474743.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2633405-43386136.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2363423-38799704.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2629240-43310460.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2548036-41924735.html
http://xhamster.com/photos/view/2608012-42952277.html


Anyway, just some thoughts on how this type of vid could be improved.

Do you agree/disagree with any/all of these ideas? Any you'd like
to add?

Comments welcome.