Would It Be Ok

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?

Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Would it be ok if I took on the part

Of being your women and showed you a view,
One that only a real women could do?

Would it be ok if I could make you smile?
Would it be ok if I held you awhile?

Would it be ok if I kissed your face?
Would it be ok if I were to replace

All the women in your past that just wouldn't do
And vow to be faithful and always be true?

Would it be alright to look in your eyes?
Would it be alright to never tell lies?

Would it be alright to find a way?
Would it be alright to long for the day

To pull you close and whisper in your ear
And tell you our feelings are nothing to fear?

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?

To tell you there's nothing I'd rather do
Than spend my whole life loving only you

By,
Ryan Stiltz
Published by ashleybenson1
3 years ago
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Nickyhere
Nickyhere 9 months ago
breathlessly...........Yes.
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ashleybenson1 Publisher 3 years ago
to eddaedda : I am glad to have you a friend kiss
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eddaedda
eddaedda 3 years ago
I guess that it's very difficult to find a woman like you in this website. I'm very proud to be your friend, kisses, Edda.
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ashleybenson1 Publisher 3 years ago
to Honeypie3 : Thanks  and yes i am well
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Honeypie3
Honeypie3 3 years ago
Lovely poem. It's nice to see any type of life on this site these days. I hope you're well Ashley. 
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ourpleasures4u2 3 years ago
Yes, It would be O.K. Nice poem Ashley Benson. Ryan said it right.
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