Transition to Vikki story
If you've seen the Stories page recently, you'll know that the Transition to Vikki story chapters have begun to be rewritten and published again.
I did this because, after reading them again with a cold analytical eye, I was dissatisfied with the original drafts. So, I took them back to my laptop and dressed them up to correct things. Typos, grammar, story plot holes have been put straight.
New situations and encounters have been added in places. Many others have been expanded, edited or shortened. The girls' names have been tinkered with too. Unintentional alliteration meant that most ended with an "A". Names of characters have changed in necessary chapters to sort this out.
As later chapters were getting a bit long, they have all been altered in length. Every chapter now has been cropped to almost the same length. This means the chapter break points have moved. Don't worry !, the story is still complete. I've just moved where chapters end and other begin in the story line.
If you're interested in finding out what changes I've made to the saga, then reread chapters one through eight. They use the original title but have the addition "(reworked)" in the title. If you're happy to keep things as they are, then read on from chapter nine.
I hope that it doesn't cause too much confusion to readers. Thanks for bearing with me.
I did this because, after reading them again with a cold analytical eye, I was dissatisfied with the original drafts. So, I took them back to my laptop and dressed them up to correct things. Typos, grammar, story plot holes have been put straight.
New situations and encounters have been added in places. Many others have been expanded, edited or shortened. The girls' names have been tinkered with too. Unintentional alliteration meant that most ended with an "A". Names of characters have changed in necessary chapters to sort this out.
As later chapters were getting a bit long, they have all been altered in length. Every chapter now has been cropped to almost the same length. This means the chapter break points have moved. Don't worry !, the story is still complete. I've just moved where chapters end and other begin in the story line.
If you're interested in finding out what changes I've made to the saga, then reread chapters one through eight. They use the original title but have the addition "(reworked)" in the title. If you're happy to keep things as they are, then read on from chapter nine.
I hope that it doesn't cause too much confusion to readers. Thanks for bearing with me.
5 years ago
